This something: Clarify your “this”

Good academic writers value nothing if not clarity. To this end, every time you use a demonstrative pronoun (this, that, these, or those), use a word or a short phrase afterward to clarify what the demonstrative pronoun refers to.

Compare clarity in the following:

Not clarified
The income of middle class families has fallen over the last decade, compared to the decade before. This shows that the government should research the causes of this.
Clarified
The income of middle class families has fallen over the last decade, compared to the decade before. This decrease shows that the government should research the causes of this disparity.

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